Loving You by -MentalCucumber-

An Alice in Wonderland story

"Alice has returned after all these years, but what happens when she meets the Hatter?"

This story has a very interesting idea, but it felt far too rushed for me. I would have really liked to have seen the author explore the separation Alice felt from her family, or more interaction with real world characters so we could really taste why they thought she was mad. This could have been a lovely multi-chap with character development and a nice buildup to the Alice/Hatter relationship, but it was a mad dash to the sex, so for me, it fell quite flat.

Loving You